Reflection of Learning & Informational essay

My class is English with Mr. Licata. What I learn in this class is vocabulary, Reading, Writing, speaking and listening. This is valuable for my future because to sound professional I need to have good vocabulary. For, reading I need to read correctly to speak it correctly. In, class our teacher assigned us to write a persuasive argument essay based on the immigration topic we chose. The topic I used was “Should immigrants who are in the country illegally be allowed to remain in the US?” My essay will explain if immigrants should still migrated to the US.
My artifact is an essay based on the topic we we’re supposed to choose which was “Should  immigrants who are in the country illegally be allowed to remain in the US?” The project instructions where to go into a website and choose a topic based on immigration. We answered it on our essay about our opinion towards it. The process I went through was that I got facts from the internet and videos from YouTube that came together to relation of my topic. I made sure to write down all my sources and all my facts. I failed at doing a good thesis statement because I could have been clearer about it I could have shown the main point of my essay little more obvious. In the book we read I learned how to see people in hastily because it shows to never give up, many people have suffered more than other people.
One of the SLO skills I mastered was “Mastering skills needed in career and college” I believed I mastered this skill because what I need for college was my vocabulary, my understanding of the topic, and evidence that supports my claims. Another skill I mastered was “Self Directed learner who communicates effectively” I communicated effectively with all my sources. I checked to see if I was in plagiarizing in any way. The artifacts demonstrated my success from the two SLO, They are important because for college I need to be prepared with my vocabulary, to have communicated effectively helps me because I'll know where to look for help. One.
In conclusion two of the most important things I learned this year was to make it a thesis statement more clear and to keep my grades up with Mr. Licata and not turn any late work. In the future this will help me by my next essay because it will help me get a better grade, and it will make my essay 10 times better.